Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Free Excerpt! Isabol Tseung Voice News Chapter 1 "Nobody Does it Better Part 2"

These are two scenes taken from different parts of the upcoming chapter, due out at the end of this month for my patreon subscribers. If you like what you see, you can always go and subscribe at 99geek.ca for simply a dollar a month to get access to over a thousand pages of my content, and a new chapter every month like episodes of tv shows. Keep in mind that this chapter hasn't been edited yet, I'll do that before release, so cut me some slack for any typos. Also, some of the typos int he dialogue are deliberate, I was trying to convey accents, to a range of effect. Let me know what you think below, or follow me on twitter @AndrewGeczy or subscribe on my patreon. Links to everything I do at 99geek.ca

Characters, places, and events are works of fiction and not at all indicative or representative of any real life person places or things. A lot of inspiration was taken from Vice, a subsidiary of HBO. Much respect is held for the journalism that goes on at Vice, and I suggest everyone check them out. I do not represent them, nor do I think my book is a factual retelling of anything relating to real life. For the true story on everything, check out Vice.com or tune in daily to   Vice News airing on HBO. I personally never miss an episode.



1x01 “Nobody does it Better Part 2”

Released on September 2018 at www.patreon.com/99geek

She could swear she recognized the song. The quiet instrumentals of the elevator warbled through a small speaker above her, playing some strange EDM version of an old pop song. Isabol was sure she’d heard the tune before, but she wasn’t exactly a music expert.

Vindicated! That was it, she thought as it got to the chorus. By Dashboard Confessional. She hadn’t heard that song in years and years.

The elevator was a rickety broken-ass junk box that was constantly getting stuck. Their office, 
downtown Hamilton, had been renovated twice as they’d grown and grown over the eight months she’d been working there, but the elevator was still the same death trap that had been here when Shane bought the building.

It jolted with a loud clack, and the dull metal doors opened to the third floor. The blonde haired blue eyed Elly Reeves stepped on to the elevator with her, the doors closing behind her as the lift lumbered loudly to a start again.

“Hi,” Isabol said politely.

Elly smiled at her from behind her massive glasses, taking a while before responding “Hey?” as if she was trying to decide which greeting to go with.

Isabol looked away from Elly, at her own blurry reflection in the dull unpolished metal doors. She could only just make out her shoulder length black hair, brown eyes, and tanned Asian features. In the door she didn’t look any more Asian than Elly. More tanned though, Elly was about as pale as someone could get. They were both wearing jeans, though Isabol’s were darker. Elly also wore a bright button up blouse, while Isabol had a worn brown leather jacket over her black wide collared shirt. Fake leather of course.

“Is that Dashboard Confessional?” Elly asked, as the elevator music warbled on. “God I haven’t heard this song in ages.”

“I know!” Isabol agreed with her, and then there was silence again in the elevator.

“So, vampire children,” Elly said, as the elevator rumbled to a stop and the doors opened with a ping to the sixth floor.’

“Have a good day,” Isabol said with a polite smile to the woman, as they split up to go to their desks.

“Oh,” Elly said, clearly disappointed they didn’t get to continue their conversation. “Okay.”

The Vice office’s top floor was a loft, with large glass windows that shone into the open concept layout. Any walls on the top floor were made of glass, short glass dividers separating the cubicle desks of ornate cleanly carved wood. She passed all the cubicles to her desk, one of the larger ones right by Shane’s office. There were balloons hung from the rafters and taped to the wooden columns and cubicles. There seemed to be some kind of celebration going on, but Isabol had no idea what it was people were celebrating. She’d been out of the office for a week straight planning her interview.

It seemed a number of reporters were crowding around one of the other correspondent’s desk.

“Isabol!” said the man the desk belonged to, center of the crowd, and of everyone’s attention in the room. Just the way he liked it. “I’m back.”

“Greg. Were you gone?” Isabol asked with disinterest. The crowd around him seemed to separate enough that he could make his way across the aisle to her desk. She stood above it, trying not to match his gaze. She didn’t feel like throwing up in her mouth.

“For a month, yeh,” He looked to the reporters around him and laughed. “You’re gonna pretend loike yeh didn’t notice. That’s a laugh.” He crossed his arms. “Moi friends call me Beckett by tha way.”

“So you keep saying,” Isabol said. At this point she was just doing it to annoy him. Everyone was watching her, obviously all celebrating his return. She tried to think of something to say so she didn’t come across as a complete anti-social bitch. “Did you have a fun vacation?”

“I was in Africa buildin’ a school for ah bunch ah kids.”

“That sounds fun,” Isabol said absentmindedly, searching her desk for something to distract her. It was mostly clear, except for a small pile of mail in the corner. She didn’t use her desk often.

“It was important, is what it was,” Beckett continued as she ignored him.

“Mmhmm.”

“I was helpin’ people. Yeh know? Makin a real difference,” Beckett was tall and slender, disgustingly good looking with naturally blonde hair and outrageous muscles. Just a little bit of eye shadow. Every woman in the office had a crush on him, and he’d slept with most of them. He didn’t even need his job there, he lived off his rich parents, and the huge trust fund they gave him. He was often bragging about all the things he’d take time off to do. Adventures helping people and being the best person he could be. And sleeping with the hottest women.

“There was this one native I slept with there that reminded me a lot ah yeh,” He told her, and she made a face.

“I really don’t want to hear about your conquests, Greg.” She noticed Tom in the crowd of people around Beckett’s desk.

“It’s Beckett,” he repeated. “Everyone calls me by my last name but you,” he said, continuing with his story. “Which is like what I was sayin. This girl was different. Like you. She was tough, bad ass, strong. Determined. Motivated. She made me realize a woman like you is worth a thousand other girls.”

Isabol stopped what she was doing to try to process his words. “You’re telling me that shagging up with another woman made you realize I’m special?”

“She also started teaching me Swahili,” he said, smartly changing the topic. “My ninth language if I can get it. I’ve bought a book to keep up with it.”

“You speak nine language?” Isabol asked.

“From all over the world,” he told her. “Wherever I’m needed, I like to be ready for anything. Everywhere I’ve volunteered at I’ve tried to pick up the local language.” He nodded to her. “You ever do any volunteer work like that?”

“Nope,” Isabol said with a shake of her head, not completely true. “I guess you’re just a better person than me.” She backed away from Beckett and met Tom’s gaze. “Did you submit our piece with the narration I sent you last night?”

“Uh,” Tom said behind his glasses, awkwardly fidgeting as all the eyes in the crowd turned on him. “Ye-yeah. I think he’s in there watching it right now.”

He glanced at Shane’s office at the back of the loft behind her and Greg Beckett’s desks. The shades were closed, and the lights clearly off behind them, as they usually were when he was viewing work prints.

“You should have led with that,” she told him, knowing full well why he didn’t as she shot Greg a dirty look. He couldn’t just interrupt Mr. alpha personality Beckett over there.

“Yeh’ve been workin’ on a new story, aye?” Beckett asked Isabol.

“I guess you’ll have to find out on Friday,” Isabol told him, the night their main show aired. They had a less popular nightly show, but their Friday edition was always meant for their most in-depth reporting.

She turned her back on him and his pile of groupies. Let them celebrate and eat cake without her. She had bigger things on her mind.

*     *     *

It was fourteen hours before their plane touched down at Mosul International Airport. From conversations she’d had with the people around her on the plane, it seemed the airport had only recently been opened again for commercial traffic. There weren’t all that many people in the baggage pick up.

There were, however, numerous armed soldiers standing guard around the perimeter. She counted more armed guards than regular airport crew.

“I can’t believe you were in that bathroom for over forty minutes,” she complained as he grabbed her bag from the rack. To make the point that she didn’t need help, she lifted his bag off the same rack, forgetting that it had been filled with cases of water bottles and weighed as much now as her. She dropped it heavily onto its wheels.

“Ay’ve got stamina,” Greg boasted. “Most women would find that a plus.” They traded suitcases, and aimed themselves for the exit. “Besides, they didn’t have any magazines.”

Isabol frowned. “Please don’t tell me you spent the whole forty minutes staring at yourself in the mirror.”

“I wasn’t just staring at myself,” he argued. “I was also giving myself words of encouragement.” He mimed himself masterbating again. “Everyone loves you. You have a beautiful penis.”

Isabol closed her eyes. “Stop.”

“I also practiced my Somali. Waxaad leedahay gus ah qurux badan.”

“What does that mean?” she asked, changing her mind. “Wait, I don’t want to know.”

They stepped through the automatic doors and the first thing Isabol noticed was the heat, scorching her like a blanket of fire.

“Ah,” Beckett said beside her. “There’s something I don’t miss. In Africa it was like this but only more humid.” He slapped shades onto his face, and she scolded herself for forgetting to even bring sunglasses. She’d just thrown as many clean socks and underwear that she could find into a carry on, and that was it. Also on the way, they’d stopped by a bank where she converted all the money she had in her account into Iraqi currency. Five hundred thousand dinars.


It actually sounded more impressive in dinars.

The second thing she noticed was the people, pushing against the military blockade keeping the crowds back. They were men and women and children, screaming and crying, covered in sand and dirt, lips parched. They surged against the blockade, reaching their arms past the gate that men with guns were struggling to keep from bursting open. At least 30 or more. Isabol was surprised there weren’t even more than that, but supposed much of the city was likely evacuated during the fighting.

Everyone all seemed to be talking at once, and Isabol couldn’t understand a word of it. One armed man approached them and said something to them, and it took a couple repeats for her to realize he was speaking in English.

“Do you have taxi? Or ride out of here?” he asked, seemingly genuinely concerned. “I afraid walking to city would be quite impossible. We call you transportation if you require.”

“We don’t have anything yet,” Isabol told him, her eyes darting across the landscape. It was flat, so flat she could see the city to the north of them. Sand was everywhere, as one would expect from a desert. Construction was underway to rebuild a bombed out building inside the airport grounds, a bulldozer clearing out rubble even as a crane was laying down new foundations. It seemed like construction was being rushed.

“Did ISIS do that?” Isabl asked the English speaking guard.

He laughed and shook his head. “That one was Americans,” he said, with a cold shrug.

Isabol pointed out to the buildings she saw past the beggars at the gate. Three out of the four in her view were equally bombed out, and reconstruction hadn’t gotten to them yet. “What about those?”

“The Americans,” he said again. “You have to be understanding, when we were fighting to retake this place there were snipers on those rooftops. Stolen military APC blocked road there.” He pointed to a crater in the street. “Man with, what you say R P G. That rooftop.” He pointed to the building inside the grounds currently under construction.

“It is complicated,” he continued, “to say who is to blame.”

Isabol nodded to the crowd of people begging for help. “Who do they blame?”

“It changes,” he responded. “Depending on who you ask.”

Isabol spared a glance at Beckett, and was surprised to find he had his SLR out and pointed at them, apparently recording their conversation. For his many faults, she was glad to see he could come through when it mattered.

“I’m gunna get some B-roll over there, if ya don’t moind,” he told Isabol, turning to capture the construction going on to their right.

The guard followed Beckett with a look of concern. “What is your reason for visit?” he asked her.

“We’re journalists,” She told him. She offered him her hand. “Isabol Tseung Voice News.”

He stiffened, and notably didn’t take her hand. “You should not be announcing this around here.” His eyes shifted to the other guards around them, all seemingly ignoring them. Assuming this soldier had them covered.

Isabol yelled across to Beckett, “Hey maybe keep it in your pants.” He turned to her confused. And she darted her eyes to the left. He didn’t get it. She took a couple steps toward him so she wouldn’t have to speak so loud. “Till were further away from some of these men with guns?” she suggested.

He nodded his understanding and hid his camera in his bag.

“So is there some kind of attack going on?” She asked the guard, stepping closer to him and speaking in hushed tones.

He laughed, not sharing her subtlety. “Was it not your president who called the news enemy of people?”

“Yeah,” Isabol mumbled. “And we had words about that.” She pulled out her phone, finding a picture of Suzie she’d downloaded to her phone. “Have you seen this woman at all?”

He looked at the picture, and then to her, and then back to the picture. He sighed, and then pulled his own phone out of his pocket, pulling up a picture, and pointing it at her. It was a very different shot, but there could be no denying it. It was a picture of her, looking tied up and bloodied, on a wanted poster.

“Have you?”

Isabol put her phone away. “That could be an added complication,” She took a swig from her water bottle. The heat was already getting to her. Or maybe it was the desert sun. What did suzie get up to, that would have her wanted by the government. A government that apparently had a prejudice against reporters, how much did Isabol want to bet Suzie was just doing her job?

At the gate, a child was able to squeeze through the metal bars, and he scurried past the legs of the guards to reach Isabol and hug at her leg tightly.

“Raja'. 'ant tabdu mithl almalak,” the boy said, incoherently. “Hal yumkinuk 'ana taetini alma'? 'Ana eatashan jiddaan.”

“The little goi says e’s thirsty,” Greg translated, joining Isabol’s side, “and asks if ‘e can have some a ya wateh.”

“Yeah,” Isabol said, handing her water bottle to the kid. The top of his head barely reached her waist, he couldn’t have been older than seven, with wild black hair and dirty torn clothes. His face was tanned to the point of sun burnt. If she had to guess, he hadn’t been home in a while.

The kid hungrily unscrewed the lid and gulped down the water like it was his first drops in days. Isabol looked past him at all the other people pushing against the gate.

“Hey Greg,” she said, “Bust open one of those cases of water, would you?” He unzipped his suitcase, and ripped open a case, passing her some bottles.

“They’re cold!” she said in surprise, not expecting them to be cool to her touch.

“It’s an insulated case,” he told her, “And I packed a ton of ice packs.”

“Do you mind?” Isabol asked the guard, taking the water bottles to the people at the gate.

His expression implied that he didn’t really want the hassle. Begrudgingly however, he approached the gate, and waved her to come with him.

She handed the two bottles to people reaching, one to a woman, and another to a little girl. Beckett came up to join her at the fence, handing her more bottles.

The guard waved at the people pressing against the gate. “Alwuquf wadih min albawwaba,” he said to the people, and many of them seemed to take a step back. The guards were looking at him funny, but he yelled to them, “Aftah albuabat. Sayakun bikhayrin!”

“Aftah Albawwaba!” another guard yelled to a man in the tower. The man yelled out to the man across the way in the other tower.

“Aftah Albawwaba!” he said as well. The gate began to creak open.

“Quickly,” the guard she’d been talking to said to her as there was enough room for her to fit through. “It not be open long much time.”

“Right,” Isabol said, taking the kid’s hand and walking with him through the gate. Greg pulled the suitcase after them, and as soon as he was through the gate, Isabol turned in time to see the guard she’d been talking to nod to the guard on the right tower.

“'Ughliq albawwaba!” he yelled across to the guard in the left tower, and the gate quickly sealed closed behind them.

“Hey!” Isabol yelled at him, feeling betrayed.

The guard smiled at her, then, ignoring her, looked out at the crowd and yelled, “'Inhum jamieaan lika.” He laughed at the crowd and continued. “Khudh alma' walmala. 'aqtul wa'aklihim , nahn la nihtam.”

“What did he just say?” Isabol asked Greg as the crowd closed in around them.

Beckett shook his head. “You don’t want to know,” he promised Isabol. “Just trust me that they’re not going to open those gates for us again.”

The child she’d given water to clutched her leg tensely as the crowd seemed hungry for their flesh.

“Take out one of those cases of water,” she told Greg.

He frowned. “I only could fit eight,” he warned her.

“Just do it,” she hissed, and he did, handing it to her. She placed the open case on the ground. “This is all yours if you’d be willing to help us out and answer some questions.”

“Yumkinuk alhusul ealaa hadhih almiah,” Greg said, translating what she was saying as fast as he could. “'iidha kunt sawf takun sadiquna”

She pulled out her wallet and counted out some money. “Also,” she said loudly. “Two hundred thousand dinars.” She raised it in the air. A man stepped forward to grab it and she raised it high in the air. “For the person willing to give us a tour of the city.”

“Lilqiam bijawla,” Greg translated.

The man who had approached Isabol reached down and grabbed a bottle of water. He opened the top and took a sip.

“'Iinah jayid,” he yelled to the crowd. The old man, he had a grisled beard and no shirt, his upper body a scrawny skeleton of a man. She could see the indents of his ribs.

That man turned to Greg and embraced him suddenly. “Bandar min alma',” he said with excitement. “Sadiq.” The rest of the crowd moved in, ripping the case apart and passing around the bottles of water.

“Yes,” Greg responded, awkwardly turning red. “'Iinaa sadiq.”

“It’s okay,” he told Isabol. “They loike us now.”

“Well done,” Isabol said with relief. She knelt down so that she was the same height as the child that still clung to her leg. “Is your mommy or daddy here amongst this crowd?”

“'Ayn eayilatuk,” Greg Beckett translated.

The kid shook his head. “Ymknny 'an akhadhak lahum.”

“He says he can take us,” Greg told Isabol. “Is that – Is that something we want?”

Isabol wasn’t sure either. But they couldn’t stand around outside the gate forever. “Yeah,” she said. “Let’s do it.”

“'Iintalaq,” Greg said in Arabic, and the kid nodded, taking off down the road toward the city. Greg and her shared a look then followed behind him, dragging their luggage behind them. And behind their luggage, about half of the people from the crowd chose to follow after them, almost as if the three of them were leading a protest march, or roving band of explorers.

They walked down the sand swept highway for over fifteen minutes before finally the child stopped, about half way between the airport and the city. Both were a distant horizon, though the wind whipping sands made it hard to see much in the distance. All she knew was there there were no buildings in the vicinity. Just a few bombed out cars around a crater. The boy led her from the crater to the side of the road, and pointed to some rags. Not just rags, bones and rotting flesh. Insects eating at their skin and eyeballs.

Isabol screamed despite herself.

“Hadha mamana,” the boy said.

“That’s ‘is Mommy,” Greg translated solemnly.

The boy pointed to another pile of rags and rotting flesh. “Hadha ‘abi.”

“That’s my father,” Greg said, forgetting to even change the pronoun.

Isabol breathed deeply so as not to scream again, the effort coming out like a gasp. She could feel her eyes tearing up, and her legs wobble under her weight. Dropping to her knees, she threw up into the sand.

“Why didn’t anyone bury them?” she asked the boy, his face emotionless even as she fell apart before his eyes.

“Hal turid minaa dafanuhum?” Greg Beckett asked the boy.

An older man, with a graying beard and overalls, slapped Beckett on the back as he passed him, followed by a few of the other men who had been in the crowd of people following behind them. “Sanadifanahum,” the old man said to Greg. “Aimnahawna eshr daqayiqa.”

“He said they will bury the boy’s family,” Greg told her. “In thanks for the water. Come on, let’s get yeh back on the road. Yeh don’t have ta watch this.”

“Come on,” Isabol called to the little boy. “You shouldn’t have to see this either.” The boy took her hand and allowed her to lead him after Beckett to the road. They sat on the hood of a bombed out car as the men gave the boy’s family a proper burial.

Beckett pulled out his camera and began filming the tender moment as Isabol watched the boy fidget and gaze concernedly at the men at work.

“How long have they been dead?” she asked the boy.

“Mundh mataa wa'ant bidun 'umuk wa'abuk?” Greg asked without taking his eyes off the camera viewscreen.

“Tset 'ashhur,” the boy responded.

“Nine months,” Greg told her.

“Bloody hell,” she muttered under her breath. “Where have you been living since then? Do you have any family?”

“'Ayn taeish alana?” Greg asked the boy.

“Fi 'ayi makan aistatyea,” the boy told him, digging his shoe into the ground. “Almabani almahjurat. Fi bed al'ahyan 'anqad minhim.”

“’e’s been living anywhere ‘e can,” Beckett told her. “Ruins a places n’ shit. He’s got no one else.”

Isabol could feel herself tearing up. A reporter had to keep herself distant. “What about food. What about school. Toys. Play? Having a normal childhood?”

Greg looked at her. “Yeh really want me ta ask him all that?”

“No,” she muttered. “I don’t know.”

“Look around,” Greg told her. “Normal’s gone out the door. We’ve entered hell. The rules have changed. It’s not about living your best life out here, luv. It’s about makin it day boi day.” He closed his camera, and slid off the car. “Why the hell did yeh think I didn’t wanna come out here,” he muttered, facing away from her.

“I’m sorry,” Isabol muttered back. As much as she hated to say it, she was the novice here, and he was the expert. He’d been to areas like this. Probably worse even. He’d made it his fool’s errand seeking danger. But he certainly wasn’t chasing it anymore. Isabol wondered when this change had happened in him, and why she hadn’t seen it before.

“What about aid,” Isabol asked no one in particular. “The united states. Canada. The UN.”

“We see nothing like that,” a woman nursing her child to her breast said from the small crowd that had followed behind them. “No aid.”

It seemed the men were done with the burial, and one of them, a middle aged man with a thick moustache and beige robes, approached her. “I have a truck,” he told her, speaking even better English than the woman. “I’ll give you that tour,” he paused. “For the two hundred thousand dinars.”

“Of course,” she said, handing the money over to him as a sign of good faith.

He took it and pocketed it in a fold amongst his robes. “It’s just up this way,” he told her. “Not far from here.”

Isabol looked at Greg, and reluctantly he grabbed his suitcase, pulling on it to follow along behind her.

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